Patti G. the Poetic Dove is here to take us on a journey through love, life, happiness and pain.  She will bless us with an interview soon.  For now, just read and enjoy - and show her some love!

Undeniably Painful 

Scattered moments mostly bliss

Waited a lifetime for times like this

Sacred ventures that only we share

Mistaken lust for what was there

Love is peaceful tearing at our hearts

Undeniably painful for us to part

If you shall fall I fall at your side

If you shall go I'm going for the ride

Through tearful moments of hurt and doubt

Its you I adore and cant live without

Passionately awaiting our days of victory

Me heart says that you were meant for me

I will mend from distress of the past

We have something that will forever last

The pictures painted were amazingly allure

What I'm trying to say is "there is no one I want more"

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Comments (18)

1  Hope you enjoy. Written by Patti G. , on 22-10-2007 11:24 , IP: 67.80.142.77 Hope you enjoy my work.

5  amazing Written by jazzy , on 22-10-2007 22:11 , IP: 67.80.142.77 You are such a talented poet! Your beauty and essence shine throughout your poetry!

6  From Poet To Poetess Written by Keenan "The Poetic Liaison" Go , on 22-10-2007 23:10 , IP: 205.188.117.19 You already know my thoughts on this particular piece for I\'ve already sent you a reply (flip) to it, so... But again lovely sis. Very beautiful: creative... thought provoking... and more hands down. Poetry is not a gift to you, but rather a part of you, so one MUST respect that if nothing more sis. Keep doin\' your thing, and I wish you nothing but the best always.    Working on MANY as we speak, so... let us both motivate the other. Stay beautiful, but remain poetic Lady Dove.    Sincerely and respectfully,    Keenan M. Gor...  (The Poet of Arms)

7  As always, the best... Written by Biggsy , on 24-10-2007 07:49 , IP: 12.104.117.25 [B]8) You know I always love and admire your work. BEAUTIFUL READ!    your biggest fanboy,  Biggs[/B]