Octavia is the newest member of the IREP Magazine.  Ladies, here is a poem for you to read to the man that's lucky enough to receive your love!

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3  The Depths of A Trying Man Written by The Renaissance Poet , on 15-02-2008 14:57 , IP: 98.26.109.175 Sister…  (Octavia!)    I loved this piece. Very heart-felt and moving sweetie! I love how you show the relations of a receptive man and that of an accepting and giving/nurturing woman. (There is nothing more precious or beautiful, than a man who praises his woman’s worth, and a woman who validates her man’s significance! – personally speaking) I say that to say this Octavia…    “In your piece, I see how there’s nothing wrong, as a man, to want to voice openly to his woman, how much she means to him; how she is the center of his world despite how minuscule or insignificant it may be to [him] – for to her it’s everything. I see how as a man, your piece commends the very essence and necessities that it takes, to be respected and too, accepted unconditionally by a woman who too, knows and values her own worth!”    Simply saying, I love(s) your poem… & I respect your thought process! Keep doin’ what you do; keep writing, and blowin’ up the poetry world sis.     Sendin’ you high regards, and utmost poetic support and encouragement.    Sincerely,    Keenan M. Gor…  ~The Poetic Lision  AKA  The Renaissance Poet~    ***And I leave with you, words from a [MAN] that wishes to show the same level of loving appraisal and genuine agreement to his fellow sisters [WOMEN].***      The Depths of A Trying Man  (His Sin Is Loving Too Much)    My love wonders  to the ends of your world,  where you’ve shown me  time and time again  how beautiful such is to be.    Death nor life is more  precious or giving than  that what which I share with   you, for you are my everything;  in and with you is my only  place of happiness – it is being   with you, it is being free.    Let me be your vessel,  to mold and better shape;  give me all reasons to be your  muse of inspiration, the   essence of your amazing states –  please do craft me in the image  of your justly wishes.  (I am nothing without you!)    I want to whisper in your   dreams notions of exactness;  fix in your loving eyes promises  ever giving…  I need to show you the measures  of my infinite love, I care to  give you all the wantin’ feelings  me heart be sending.    I won’t ever desert you,  I’ll never ask you to be any  different or less of who you are;  I can never fully be complete  or even sincerely happy,  if I am without you, if you   are lost afar.    Give me your hands  and lead me home to where  good things do reside,  share with me your needs   and open up your cares  so I won’t have to be  a man who hides.    Because…  My love wonders  to the ends of your world,  where you’ve shown me  time and time again  how beautiful such is to be.    I love you more than  my own-self, ‘cause  you are the one person –  the only woman –  I ever care to please.  (I am nothing without you!)      copyright©2008-pending: Keenan.M.Gorham

5  Wantin' To Get The Book! Written by The Renaissance Poet , on 17-02-2008 19:37 , IP: 98.26.109.175 Where can I get the book from sis? Gotta show love and support a fellow artists/poet, so. PLEASE fill me in, and I'll make sur eto purchase it when I hear about it.    ~God's Poet: "The Renaissance Man"

6  WoW Written by Paradise , on 18-02-2008 13:08 , IP: 68.246.236.240 Enjoyed your peom. Keep doing your thang ma!!

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