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LJ2-small copy.jpgAuthor/Poet LeJuane Bowens brings to the stage a new poem.  A special creation dedicated to all the ladies that have made their men feel the way LeJuane feels about the woman he describes.  Men,you might want to copy this and read it to your girl for Valentine's Day






You make me want to be the man that I was destined to become
You make me want to forget about anything that deals with pain
And only think of the pleasure that you bring to fill my hunger for
Intimacy and companionship.
You make me want to drop all the things I could be doing at this moment
Just so I can rush to where you're at
And be within your presence which is equivalent to a Nubian queen
Making me the servant that's here to do your bidding.
You make me want to not think about chasing after more than one woman
But to only be with one woman
You make me think about you when I’m not around you
You make me envision the footsteps that seem to echo the sound of you
I think, I say again, I think that this may be the beginning
The beginning of me losing my mind and time
For someone who is as fine as a vintage wine
Chilled and preserved for 72 years to give it that distinct flavor
That's in my favor and I am very happy to savor
The taste which I would only compare to the nectar of the Gods
A taste that plays around in my mouth long enough for me to
Keep swallowing my on saliva as the traces of you have just now
Merged within my taste buds
And the only thing I can image every time that I think of something
Sweet, juicy, and mouthwatering
Is you to the point that my mouth waters
Every time that I say your name
You make me want to embrace this thought that lingers in my head like a lie that I can’t hold back
Like a snitch that sits in a interrogation room
And this I must confess
I confess that I am so deep into being with you
That I began to ponder on ways to become a smell that you inhale
So that way the very essence of me swims within your bloodstream
There's no way to conceal that bit of evidence
So go ahead, slap me with the maximum time of
Life with you.
I've always been made to be a lot of things in this life
But one thing that i am glad to be made into
Is the man that continually says
I love you.
(c)2008 LeJuane Bowens

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 1 Lovely
Written by Calida Jacobs, on 14-02-2008 13:52 , IP: 75.184.15.202
It is a blessing to see a man who loves his woman.Great Poem
 2 "A Man's Greatest Accomplishment Is Hi
Written by The Renaissance Poet website, on 15-02-2008 15:35 , IP: 98.26.25.162
I must agree with Jospeh on this piece brother… It is very much something that a many of us males (too including myself at times – though not saying I function and operate on/to the opposite of this behavior more times than not, but still…) on here and elsewhere about, do need to adhere to and abide by, this piece in many respects. 
 
Any man that can be sensitive yet secure- truly express himself and be very open and honest emotionally as well spiritually - concerning yet loving, and supportive yet assertive to his woman – and do so by showing how “reliable, trusting, faithful, and communicative” he is and can be – is very much a [MAN] who will inevitably strengthen himself and his household (uplift his woman and help her realize how special and meaningful she is). Too… he will learn much and adopt even greater and healthier principles in the process, and continue to lead by positive example; even more… be deemed as one who’s more-so a “noble/wise (receptive) gentleman” than he is simply a good/honest (giving) man! 
 
Enjoyed reading it LeJuane! Keep it up… keep’em comin’, and most importantly… stay blessed and always better your craft and be thankful of your gifts/talents my brother. 
 
High regards, 
 
Keenan M. Gor… 
~The Poetic Liaison 
AKA 
The Renaissance Poet~ 
 
Round II: 
(From your other half… A Fellow Poet!) 
 
***My Motto: “Too Much Is Never Enough”*** 
 
THE CORE 
Her lashes like 
ancient star dusts, 
prim like golden  
tombs, stretch to 
the centers of my 
Egyptian earth. 
 
My virtues lie in 
her mystic ravines 
like myrrh and silver. 
 
Where my fringes contort 
and reform from specter 
to immortal idol; 
and so she gleams, 
like unearthed gems: 
her rings like Saturn, 
eyes like opal pearls, 
skin like silken’d bronze, 
grail like precious scarabs, 
her smile like silent moons. 
 
She mesmerizes me. 
Through her panes, 
tamely my Heaven embalms  
itself; there – within her 
moment of mortal reign – 
factions of my tired 
mar bud from her like  
splendid cocoons, 
and grows. 
 
She is my core: 
she is my world – 
lady Africa! 
(She is everything to me, 
but still I want her more!) 
 
 
 
Copyright©08 (Pending) – K.M.G.
 3 Written by Lynn Blue, on 16-02-2008 20:00 , IP: 71.224.197.181
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! 
Heard you read do this piece and it toughed me and it continued to do so reading it.  
Much Love 
Lady Blue
 4 Another Work Of Art
Written by Shanice, on 18-02-2008 07:50 , IP: 75.184.15.202
Loving this piece.I know this wasn't in your book so I can only imagine what you got brewing for the second one.Take care.Bless

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