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JoHeePoeTry.jpgIn 1987 a hurricane hit Miami - and 20 years later its force is being felt around the world!  JoHee PoeTry is a poetic force of nature out of Miami, Florida (Little Havana - represent!)  Check out her first submission - "Flowers of Black" - and allow this young lady to touch your soul through her words.
 





"Flowers Of Black"


She stands in the middle of the grave

Her flesh turning white as she stands over her own body

She looks around her as she watches her family sob

She is desperate to tell her mother her soul is still alive

Scared that her family wont celebrate the same as before

Watching her father praying to the lord

Everybody with their heads down in one row

Laying flowers on the brown casket

There is no point for flowers

It doesnt make any sense to her

Flowers of black

Flowers are not supposed to die with her

Flowers of black

Every soul always come back

She stands next to her older brother

Wondering if she made him proud

One tear falls from his cheek

She catches that one tear in her pale hand

Feels the salty drop and rubs it on her cheek

Because all she feels is numbness

No emotion left in that soul

But she still feels the warmth in her family

She knows they love her

She died too young but accomplished everything she wanted

She is just so surprised the random people around her

The love is in the air

Even if its love with sadness

In minutes she sees all the flowers in that casket

Flowers of black

Every Hand, every touch she counted

Red flowers turned to flowers of black

Flowers of black

Her soul always comes back



Copyrighted 2007

 

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  Comments (3)
 1 Terriffic!
Written by Rage B, on 02-06-2008 13:02 , IP: 199.244.214.30
I love this poem! It reminds me of how I felt when I went to a friends funeral in High School. Deep piece!
 2 Written by johee626, on 02-06-2008 20:52 , IP: 74.233.236.122
Hello there, thanks for reading my poem. 
You can check out my page at  
www.myspace.com/johee626
 3 PRM of C.O.R.E. & CEO The M.A.L.E. Secto
Written by The Renaissance Poet website, on 24-07-2008 19:33 , IP: 198.85.228.129
A poet’s greatest muse is that of a fellow poet, so… 
 
I want to thank a sister by the name of Johee who inspired me to write this piece in response to her own titled “Flowers Of Black.” Beautifully written if I may say so. After reading it (for I see where this came from!) I had to compliment it with a short piece of my own.  
 
So if I may… 
(In response to “Flowers Of Black”) 
 
“Flowers Of Black” 
 
From processions to proceedings she could 
feel herself waning from everyone’s heart 
but that was not enough, even in spirit she prayed 
and began for a new start… 
for her soul came back 
like melancholy rising in slighted dreams 
still she could hear the graveyard cherubs sing 
and surprisingly witness 
her friends and even foe bawl alongside  
her lasting rest with sympathy and woe 
 
Closing words would not be remised  
as they’d be coupled to send her off with  
a loving, heartfelt and earnest kiss 
heads burry themselves in awe 
all around and not an unmoved being in sight 
but there she remained poised, her head 
buried in disbelief ‘pon all her might 
oddly enough she could see all the lives she touched  
without ever laying a single hand 
and how all the memories she’d amass 
with those she never thought would last 
(her apparitional tears would fall…) 
 
An elder would voice in her remembrance: 
“An angel is born when a child dies 
so we must not burden ourselves 
over the loss of a mortal love but delight 
in knowing that we’ve been given an Angel 
in disguise to watch over our family!” 
And as the last member would adorn 
her site with an earthly yet most precious of gift 
(a flower) such would hit her most and she’d miss – 
that of a sweet red rose once given to her mother 
that now lay atop of her given by her mother 
as it be weighed down heavy with sorrow 
and shame but mostly lonesomeness 
and concern, resembling a flower dipp’d in black 
- representing her lost soul 
 
For this last moment overwhelms and consumes  
her entirely so all she can do is cringe as 
her ethereal cries would befall 
drenching evermore and leave her - 
a once zealous and bright young girl - 
as this beautiful and spirited 
Flower of Black. 
 
 
 
 
©COPYRIGHT08-PENDING:KEENAN M. GORHAM 
(The Endowed Hand… “The Renaissance Poet”)

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