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Undeniably Painful by Poetic Dove!

Patti G. the Poetic Dove is here to take us on a journey through love, life, happiness and pain. She will bless us with an interview soon. For now, just read and enjoy - and show her some love!

Undeniably Painful

Scattered moments mostly bliss

Waited a lifetime for times like this

Sacred ventures that only we share

Mistaken lust for what was there

Love is peaceful tearing at our hearts

Undeniably painful for us to part

If you shall fall I fall at your side

If you shall go I'm going for the ride

Through tearful moments of hurt and doubt

Its you I adore and cant live without

Passionately awaiting our days of victory

Me heart says that you were meant for me

I will mend from distress of the past

We have something that will forever last

The pictures painted were amazingly allure

What I'm trying to say is "there is no one I want more"

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Comments (18)

1 Hope you enjoy.
Written by Patti G. , on 22-10-2007 11:24 , IP: 67.80.142.77
Hope you enjoy my work.

2 Written by Margie, on 22-10-2007 11:51 , IP: 130.219.8.253
:grin

I love it ma. You're writing is amazing. I've told you this before and will continue.

3 Written by ripp, on 22-10-2007 15:57 , IP: 67.82.156.112
i loved it, it was very good, kudos to you.

4 Written by Kristi, on 22-10-2007 20:00 , IP: 75.18.195.152
Another Beautiful Poem that hits the nail on the head.

5 amazing
Written by jazzy , on 22-10-2007 22:11 , IP: 67.80.142.77
You are such a talented poet! Your beauty and essence shine throughout your poetry!

6 From Poet To Poetess
Written by Keenan "The Poetic Liaison" Go , on 22-10-2007 23:10 , IP: 205.188.117.19
You already know my thoughts on this particular piece for I\'ve already sent you a reply (flip) to it, so... But again lovely sis. Very beautiful: creative... thought provoking... and more hands down. Poetry is not a gift to you, but rather a part of you, so one MUST respect that if nothing more sis. Keep doin\' your thing, and I wish you nothing but the best always.

Working on MANY as we speak, so... let us both motivate the other. Stay beautiful, but remain poetic Lady Dove.

Sincerely and respectfully,

Keenan M. Gor...
(The Poet of Arms)

7 As always, the best...
Written by Biggsy , on 24-10-2007 07:49 , IP: 12.104.117.25
You know I always love and admire your work. BEAUTIFUL READ!

your biggest fanboy,
Biggs

8 Written by Wisdom, on 24-10-2007 08:32 , IP: 68.80.248.203
Now that's BEAUTIFUL!!!

9 Written by smoogies, on 25-10-2007 15:43 , IP: 67.80.142.77
what can i say. alway writting that killa poetry. i remember when i used to be rite next to u as u created ur masterpiece... lol

10 Written by THE CHAMP, on 25-10-2007 17:09 , IP: 96.234.21.234
GOOD POEM PATTI..NOW ALL U GOTTA DO IS DO IT IN FRONT OF CROWD..U DEF. DID YA THING WIT THIS ONE

Patti G. the Poetic Dove is here to take us on a journey through love, life, happiness and pain. She will bless us with an interview soon. For now, just read and enjoy - and show her some love!

Undeniably Painful

Scattered moments mostly bliss

Waited a lifetime for times like this

Sacred ventures that only we share

Mistaken lust for what was there

Love is peaceful tearing at our hearts

Undeniably painful for us to part

If you shall fall I fall at your side

If you shall go I'm going for the ride

Through tearful moments of hurt and doubt

Its you I adore and cant live without

Passionately awaiting our days of victory

Me heart says that you were meant for me

I will mend from distress of the past

We have something that will forever last

The pictures painted were amazingly allure

What I'm trying to say is "there is no one I want more"

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Comments (18)

11 Written by emily, on 26-10-2007 16:31 , IP: 69.142.47.152
null patti, ur such an amazing person. keep up the work. ue such a great friend. love ya always, emily n jennifer...

12 I LOVE YOU
Written by Ju@n3y , on 26-10-2007 16:47 , IP: 67.84.47.4
just wanted to say i love u babii gurla.... u always on ma mind.... im just dat asshole dat doesnt show it.. but its just me... i love you ma... god bless you.....

13 Written by Dani, on 26-10-2007 19:21 , IP: 69.142.47.152
I love it, it's beautiful. I can't wait to read more of your work. You need to write more.

14 A Work Of Art
Written by Lagatek , on 01-11-2007 20:25 , IP: 138.89.176.13
We have something that will forever last the friendship the family the the uncle you love to my niece Patti G i send you much love..Uncle Dre..A WORK OF ART

15 Written by antonio, on 11-11-2007 10:06 , IP: 72.94.72.155
love the poem from a true poet

16 simplydivine
Written by jossie , on 11-11-2007 17:11 , IP: 72.229.253.126
wow amazing

wow girl i am feeling this. You got me open with that poem.. great job and keep up the good work and continue making me want more.~ jossie

17 Written by Nicole Little, on 12-11-2007 08:59 , IP: 216.142.43.20
I love it. I mean it's real. It actually explains the way i feel for someone in my life right now. Love is a powerful emotion...Keep up the good work. Best wishes!!!!

18 Written by Erica, on 09-03-2008 21:12 , IP: 68.189.169.135
This is so beautiful. You truely are an insperation for me as well as others.